Mandarin lesson in hong kong-How do you think the report I wrote?

♦A:我写的报告你看怎样?
Wǒ xiě de bàogào nǐ kàn zěnyàng?
How do you think the report I wrote?
♦B:不错,但是还是可以做得更好。
Bùcuò, dànshì háishì kěyǐ zuò de gèng hǎo.
Not bad, but there is more room for improvement.
♦A:嗯,我开始得太仓促了。
Ń, wǒ kāishǐ de tài cāngcùle.
En. I jumped the gun.
♦B:你的报告中有些遗漏之处,请写得更完整些。
Nǐ de bàogào zhōng yǒuxiē yílòu zhī chù, qǐng xiě de gèng wánzhěng xiē.
There were some gaps in your report. Please be more thorough.
♦A:是的,我忽视了一些事实。 我会更全面的看问题。
Shì de, wǒ hūshìle yīxiē shìshí. Wǒ huì gèng quánmiàn de kàn wèntí.
Yes, I overlooked some facts. I’ll be more thorough.